Sunday 25 August 2013

Writing Instructions

In class we are learning to write instructions. Instructions inform people of how to do something. We started by writing instructions as a class about 'How to Play Silent Ball' Then we wrote our own instructions about 'How to Cross a Road Safely' Here are some of our instructions ...


How to Cross a Road Safely. 


  1. Stop at the side of the road. 
  2. Hold an adults hand. 
  3. Look left and right. Do it 2 times. 
  4. Walk across the road safely. 

Jayden 

How to Cross a Road. 

  1. Stop at the footpath
  2. Look for the black and white stripes. 
  3. Hold onto an adults hand. 
  4. Look both ways twice. 
  5. Cross the road if no cars are coming. 

Georgia

How to Cross a Road Safely

You will need:
Adult or someone older than 16

  1. Stop at the footpath
  2. Hold onto an adults hand. 
  3. Look left or right. Do it twice. 
  4. After you have looked left or right you can cross the road safely. 

Lucy

How to Cross a Road Carefully

Have a parent with you. 

  1. Stop at a footpath. 
  2. Hold  a parents hand. 
  3. Look left and right twice. 
  4. Walk across the road.

Cam

How to Cross a Road

  1. Stop on the footpath. 
  2. Look for the black and white stripes. 
  3. Hold an adults hand. 
  4. Look left and right twice. 

Ollie

How to Cross the Road Safely

Look both ways. 
Hold someones hand. 
Stop on the footpath. 
Wait till a car goes past. 

Megan

How to Cross a Road Safely 

  1. Stop on the side of the footpath. 
  2. Hold onto an adults hand. 
  3. Look left and right two times. 
  4. If nothing is coming cross the road. 
  5. Don’t run across the road. 

Gemma

How to Cross a Road Safely

  1. You hold an adults hand. 
  2. You look both ways. 
  3. You listen just in case there are cars and then if there are no cars you can cross. 

Penny

How to Cross the Road Safely

What you need: 
An adult or someone older than 16

  1. Hold a parents hand. 
  2. Stand at the end of the footpath. 
  3. Look left and right. Do this twice. 

Heather

How to Cross a Road 

  1. Stop at the side of the road. 
  2. Hold an adults hand. 
  3. Look both ways twice. 
  4. Walk across the road. 

Henry


On Thursday we made toast during class and wrote instructions. Here are some of the instructions for making toast. 



How to Make Toast

1.Have a toaster.
  1. Put the bread in the toaster.
  2. Pop the bread.
  3. Put honey on the bread or jam. 
  4. Eat your bread.
  5. Then you are all done. 

How to Make Toast

You need a toaster and bread and something to put on the bread. You need to put the toast in the toaster. Put down the lever and wait. When it pops take the toast out and put the spread on and eat it. 

Chantal 

How to Make Awesome Toast 

You will need: 
bread
plate
knife
spread

Put the bread in the toaster and push the button down and wait and the bread pops up. 

Cosine

How to Make Wonderful Toast. 

Things you need:
Toaster
Bread
Knife
Spread
Plate

  1. Wash your hands.
  2. Push the cord into the plug. 
  3. Get the bread out. 
  4. Put the bread into the toaster. 
  5. Push the button down. 
  6. Wait for the toast to pop up. 
  7. Spread the spreading on the toast. 
  8. Cut it into halves. 
  9. Eat the toast. 

Jake

How to Make Yummy Toast

Things you need:
toaster
bread
knife
spread
plate

  1. Wash your hands. 
  2. Plug the cord in. 
  3. Put the bread in. Push the button 
  4. Take the bread out. 
  5. Eat it. 

Wyatt

How to Make Yummy Toast

Things you need:
Toaster
Bread
Knife
Spread
Plate

  1. Wash your hands. 
  2. Plug the cord. 
  3. Put the bread in the toaster. 
  4. Push the button down. 
  5. Take the bread out. 
  6. Put the spread on the toast. 
  7. Eat it. 

Harry

How to Make Good Toast 

Things you need:
Toaster
Bread
Plate
Knife
Spread
Electricity

  1. Put the bread in the toaster and push the button down. 
  2. Wait until the toast pops up. 
  3. You then take the toast out. 
  4. Put some spread on it. 

Ben

How to Make Toast

Things you need. 
Toast
Bread
Plate
Knife
Spread

  1. Put the bread in the toaster
  2. Put the button down. 
  3. When it pops take it out. 
  4. Put the spread on it. 
  5. Eat it. 

Tarquin

How to Make Yummy Toast Carefully. 

What you need: 
Electricity
Bread
Toaster
People
Spread

  1. Plug in the toaster. 
  2. Put the bread in. 
  3. Turn on the electricity. 
  4. Put the bread in. 
  5. Put down the lever. 
  6. Wait for a bit. Pop it comes out. 
  7. Spread it. 
  8. Take out the hot toast. 
  9. Her is the fun part we have to eat it. 

Sam

How to Make Toast

You will need:
Toast
People
Bread
Spread

Cut it and Eat it. 

Olivia

How To Make Toast

Things you need:
Plate
Knife
Toaster
Bread

  1. Wash your hands.
  2. Plug in the cord.
  3. Put the bread into the toaster. 
  4. Push the button. 
  5. Wait for the bread to pop. 

Savana

How To Make Toast

  1. Get a toaster and bread. 
  2. Put the bread in the toaster. 
  3. Press the button down. 
  4. Get a knife and a spread.
  5. When it pops you take it out. 
  6. You get the knife and spread and spread the toast and cut it into quarters. 
  7. Get a plate. 
  8. Put the toast on the plate.
  9. You can eat it. 

Madi. F.

How To Make Great Toast

Things you need:
A toaster
Bread
Plate
Knife
Spread

  1. Put the bread in the toaster
  2. Then Push down the button and wait for it to pop. 

Madi. O

How to Make Toast

Things you need:
Toaster
Bread
Plate
Knife
Spread

Put the bread in the toaster. Then you push the button down and wait. When it pops up take it out. 

Aniska


3 comments:

  1. What super duper instruction writers you all are. Mrs Grant

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  2. It sounds like Kanuka class all know how to cross the road safely. Good job! I loved your toast instructions. I'm glad that Ben and Sam mentioned electricity - it would be a bit tricky to cook toast without it. Mrs O

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  3. Kanuka you are writing excellent instructions! I like how Sam and Olivia have included that you need 'people' to eat toast, because you certainly do!! I am looking forward to seeing what you are going to be writing instructions about next?! Well done Kanuka team!
    Miss Ward :)

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