Saturday 26 October 2013

Descriptive Writing - About Us!

In Kanuka we have been re-visiting how to add description into our stories. Here is a chart of all the different ways we can describe something.  


Last week we wrote descriptions about ourselves. We had to think about what we looked like, what we liked doing, and what characteristics are special to us! 

We weren't allowed to say who we were and then others in the class got to guess based on our descriptions. Can you guess who we are...? 

I like to dance and sing. I like to skip and jump with my jumpy legs. My hair is brown and my favourite country in Australia. Guess who I am?

I like farming. My hair is golden brown. I’m short. My eyes are blue. Guess who I am?

I have blue eyes and I have some freckles on my face. I have a brother that is annoying, he is five. I have blonde hair and I am 7 years old. I am a boy. Guess who I am?

I like to play rugby. My eyes are brownish green. I live on a farm and I have freckles. I have two John Deer’s and I love the All Blacks. Guess who I am?

I have long blonde hair and green eyes and a fat lip. My friends are Lucy, Addi and Chantal. I have a brother called Tom. I go into Mum and Dad’s bed in the morning. Guess who I am?

I am 6. I am a girl. I have brown hair. My best friend is Olivia. My eyes are blue. I have a sister that is 8. I have a little bit of freckles. Guess who I am?

She has long brown hair and green eyes. She has one nose, two ears and one mouth. I have two brothers and a baby sister. My friends are Addi, Lucy and Olivia. I am six. Guess who this is?

This person that is writing has black hair and black eyes. She likes to draw and she likes to play with her brother. She likes to go on the tyre swing. She has two brothers and one sister. Guess who I am?

I have got brown hair and I am kind. My eyes are black. I am fun. I have got two teeth out. I am big. I am six. Guess who I am?

She has brown hair. She has colourful socks. Her hair is tied up and she is wearing a brown jersey. She has blue clothes and pink nails. Guess who this is?

This person has long blonde hair. She has blue eyes. She has dimples. She has her hair in a pig tail. She has freckles on her nose. She has tights on her. She has a hair-tie on her wrist. She has purple nail polish on her nails. She is seven years old. Guess who this is?

I have blue eyes. I have freckles all over me. I go on the Pomahaka bus. I have a two wheeler. I can wiggle my ear lobes. I like giving flowers out. Guess who I am?

I have brown eyes. I can look like a rabbit by putting my teeth out. I am a human. I have dark brown hair. I have a four wheeler. I can wiggle my ears. I have a freckly nose. My ear lobes are big and stretchy. I like wiggling my eye browns. I like the outdoors. Guess who I am?

I have brown hair and brown yes. I have a nose. I like playing with my brothers. Guess who I am?

I have brown hair. I am six. I have blue eyes, a mouth and two ears. I have had teeth out. I have glasses. I have a dark blue jersey and dark blue pants. I have 10 fingers and 10 toes. I have teeth in my mouth. Guess who I am?

He has two eyes in the middle of his head. He has glasses on. He has blonde hair. He has green eyes. He has had 3 teeth out. Guess who I am?

I like to play rugby. I am 7. I always watch the All Blacks. I have a black dot on my lip. I have black hair. I am really good at sorting out stuff. I have blue eyes. I’m very clever. I’m the fastest person in my whole family. I leave my easter eggs for Christmas. Guess who I am?

I have blonde hair and freckles all over my face. I have long shorts. I love maths and the daily 5. I love reading and playing outside. Guess who I am?

I have small brown freckles and lightish brown hair. I am a girl and I have a talent on the ukelele. Guess who I am?

I have freckles and I wear a bracelet all the time at school. I love maths a lot. I like pony’s and foals and horses too. I like playing ball tag outside. Guess who I am?

I have two eyes. I have 4 freckles. I have 10 fingers. I am six years old. I make holes in my sicks. I like to play rugby but I aren’t one of the rugby boys. I’m faster than my sister. My best colour is green. My best animal is dinosaurs. I like jam on toast. I have brown eyes. Guess who I am?

She has black long hair and dark golden eyes. She has three missing teeth. I like going to school. Guess who I am?

She has dark hair and blue eyes. She has a nose and two ears. She has pink nails. She has two feet. Guess who I am?

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